토플 라이팅 답변 - (1)

문제:여행을 계획할 때 여행사를 이용해야 하는지 개인적으로 여행을 계획해야 하는지에 대해 어떻게 생각하십니까? 

 

I think that individuals can utilize a travel company’s plan when they travel abroad. The main reason for this is the significant enhancement they bring to the convenience and efficiency of our daily lives. To be specific, utilizing travel plans of professional companies generates opportunities for individuals to save time and effort.  relying on professional travel plans allows us to save time and effort. (Moreover) Furthermore, we can have a more diverse experience thanks to their well- made plans since they know diverse and exact information than we do, especially for elderly people. their well-crafted itineraries provide a more diverse experience, as they possess a wealth of diverse and precise information, particularly beneficial for elderly travelers.In today’s fast-paced world, efficiently managing time and leading simpler lives are essential. People can achieve this by utilizing various services offered by companies. Drawing from my personal experience, when my grandparents expressed their desire to visit China, we opted to use the travel company’s travel package. This experience was delightful and convenient. In addition, the guided tour gave us valuable historical information (insights) that we can’t obtain  on our own.

 

문제: 인턴십이 학생들에게 어떤 영향을 끼치는가

 

I see why Michael thinks internships only benefit companies, not students. But I think they're great for students too. Internships teach us a lot about life and work and help us get ready for jobs. Nowadays, companies give interns real responsibilities, not just easy stuff. It's a chance for us to start our careers there. When I did my internship, I started with mundane tasks but I gradually tackled more challenging assignments. And because of that experience, I got a job offer from the same company. So, internships can really help students get ahead.